Gone but not forgotten (A story about Mary and Hieronymous)

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thezooqueen · #1 Post by **thezooqueen** » Fri Sep 07, 2012 3:10 pm

This is my first attempt at a FanFic. Please take care of me. This is chapter 1. Chapter 2 is in 2nd round of editing and chapter 3 is in the process of being written.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8504472/1/G ... -forgotten

anastasia.stephenson · #2 Post by **anastasia.stephenson** » Sat Sep 08, 2012 3:20 am

That was amazing! I can't wait till the second chapter is done. : D

thezooqueen · #3 Post by **thezooqueen** » Sat Sep 08, 2012 3:56 am

hehe thanks. I have 2 and 3 complete. I am just waiting on 3 to be edited. I plan on posting 2 and 3 together because 2 might leave some people going uh this doesn't make sense.

thezooqueen · #4 Post by **thezooqueen** » Tue Sep 11, 2012 4:27 am

Here is chapter 2

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8504472/2/G ... -forgotten

I will get ch3 up as soon as possible

cae · #5 Post by **cae** » Tue Sep 11, 2012 10:39 am

Very nice. Going to be a stickler and tell you there's a typo where you meant to write "shower" in Chapter 1. Of course, it didn't impede the reading so I guess you can just leave it alone.

I'll be looking out for chapter 3 ^^

thezooqueen · #6 Post by **thezooqueen** » Wed Sep 12, 2012 7:54 am

Thanks. It is fixed now.

cae · #7 Post by **cae** » Wed Sep 12, 2012 10:23 am

Haha, it wasn't a huge thing. It's one of those kinds of typos that just gets ignored by autocorrections. Not like it stopped me, I was like "Huh? Oh wait, duh. She's in the bathroom" and kept reading lol

thezooqueen · #8 Post by **thezooqueen** » Wed Sep 12, 2012 12:07 pm

hehe yes I understand

My grammar and spelling is horrible. The darling angle on this site that is editing my story for me must be half insane by now.

anastasia.stephenson · #9 Post by **anastasia.stephenson** » Thu Sep 13, 2012 1:36 am

Oh goodness i love your story!! I need more now!! Lol

thezooqueen · #10 Post by **thezooqueen** » Thu Sep 13, 2012 1:40 am

hehe Thank you! I am just waiting on ch3 to be edited. Then after I make updates. I will post it.

cae · #11 Post by **cae** » Mon Sep 17, 2012 5:56 am

moar now plx D:<

I don't like waiting!!! LOL

thezooqueen · #12 Post by **thezooqueen** » Mon Sep 17, 2012 6:19 am

I really want to but my editor has not finished it yet. She is also working on her story. I could go ahead and post it but there will bee all sorts of errors and revisions needed. My grammar sucks LoL

anastasia.stephenson · #13 Post by **anastasia.stephenson** » Tue Sep 18, 2012 3:47 am

Mental editing. Ill do it if it means more of your awesome story

thezooqueen · #14 Post by **thezooqueen** » Tue Sep 18, 2012 5:21 am

mental editing??

cae · #15 Post by **cae** » Tue Sep 18, 2012 10:03 am

Read it, and edit it in your own head as you read? Hehe. I don't know, I guessed!