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Re: Magical Diary: Wolf Hall

Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2018 11:48 pm
by phoenixgirl
:o It looks fantastic! :D

Re: Magical Diary: Wolf Hall

Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2018 12:39 am
by Wakuseino
Oho! "Tell no one. Do not speak of the Otherworld under any circumstances." I kind of love this.

"Don't do what I did, you idiot."

Re: Magical Diary: Wolf Hall

Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2018 4:14 pm
by hanako
Second attempt, ruthlessly slicing frames for time in order to be able to put the text up separately:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PaRL2zkYtfA

Re: Magical Diary: Wolf Hall

Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2018 5:33 pm
by surreal_chameleon
I'd cut Grabner's "I am a living reminder--" line. The length of his sequence is out of sync with the pacing of the other ones and his dialogue will have more dramatic punch if you leave the first line out. Was thrilled to see the individual at the 28 second mark, if she's who I think she is.

Re: Magical Diary: Wolf Hall

Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2018 6:26 pm
by MillaMaxwell
The second version's a lot easier to follow, but I agree that you could probably trim the beginning of Grabiner's speech. It's a lot to read in a pretty short amount of time and throws off the pacing a little, since no one else has that much text. Anyway, I am so excited for this Kickstarter! :D

Re: Magical Diary: Wolf Hall

Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2018 7:23 pm
by babyblue
The new character designs look so so good! I'm in love!
Would love to see maybe a "remastered" version of Horse Hall with the new art style.

That said, I'm extremely stoked for Wolf Hall and will probably buy is as soon as it's out. AAAAAAA. The story seems amazing as well. And I also agree with the comments above mine regarding the trailer.

Re: Magical Diary: Wolf Hall

Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2018 6:01 pm
by hanako
Third take, cutting Grabiner's speech slightly and adding a bit of Barbara in exchange.

https://youtu.be/567MFr1Jwxc

Re: Magical Diary: Wolf Hall

Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2018 11:56 pm
by phoenixgirl
Removing a line from Grabiner's speech definitely improves the pacing of the vid. :)

Re: Magical Diary: Wolf Hall

Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2018 7:47 pm
by crystalsilverwood
wow, these look really awesome! I like the 3rd video best as well.

Re: Magical Diary: Wolf Hall

Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2018 12:00 pm
by hanako
If you haven't seen on twitter, I've explained a little bit about who the WolfPC is (and why Grabiner is involved with his secret identity).

Knowing how much Grabiner LOVES his family background, you can imagine how happy he is about all this!

Re: Magical Diary: Wolf Hall

Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2018 10:22 pm
by M_Keith
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Re: Magical Diary: Wolf Hall

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2018 10:08 pm
by Bloody Vikings
I'd popped back into the forums after filling out my collection of Hanako games in the Winter sale and, man, am I and my SO psyched to hear that Wolf Hall has some forward momentum!

Re: Magical Diary: Wolf Hall

Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2019 9:08 pm
by EenPersoon
I've read the posts on twitter about WolfPC's background. It's very interesting! I look forward to learn more about his family when playing the game. One little thing that stood out to me: he's using a false name (the name the player gives him, right?) while studying at Iris Acadamy. I wonder if his real name will be revealed at some point...

Re: Magical Diary: Wolf Hall (Early development thread)

Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2019 10:18 pm
by hanako
So here's a thought for you to consider.

William is assigned to look after WolfPC, so he'll be his senior during Freshman Initiation.

How will that affect the other freshman/senior pairups?

Re: Magical Diary: Wolf Hall (Early development thread)

Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2019 5:51 am
by Foelhe
hanako wrote:So here's a thought for you to consider.

William is assigned to look after WolfPC, so he'll be his senior during Freshman Initiation.

How will that affect the other freshman/senior pairups?
Well, o' course William can't be Ellen's senior during Initiation, and that means Damien's looking for another freshman. Y'know, it actually would make a lot of sense if Damien tried to become Ellen's senior, come to think of it. Seems like Damien's actively targeting wild seeds.