Cute Knight Deluxe Fan competition entry - twist of Fate

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Cute Knight Deluxe Fan competition entry - twist of Fate

#1 Post by kidlike » Mon Sep 03, 2007 8:11 pm

Born in the month of water had set Sandra apart from the others during her years in the orphanage, while most of the other children were busy trying to secure a future job or hoping to be adopted by a good family; Sandra seemed to have other plans…
Since she was a child she seemed to bring good fortune to all who have crossed her path.
At the age of seven years thanks to her observation the fire was stopped early and the building saved
At the age of nine she had already composed her first haiku “long poemâ€

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hmm

#2 Post by kidlike » Fri Sep 14, 2007 8:41 am

ok what do you think?
this is the first time I've ever written a fan fiction so even if you think it's not so good I'd like to knolw

thanks

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#3 Post by phoenixgirl » Sat Sep 22, 2007 6:40 am

Ooohh I like the story. It gives a very interesting twist to Cute Knight. Is Axon a made-up character or is he from Cute Knight, too? :)
Please help and support me here.

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#4 Post by Sani » Sun Sep 23, 2007 11:32 am

:D Congrats to a interesting and well done (first) story, I think it was a good one!

Sani.

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#5 Post by StarViella » Tue Sep 25, 2007 2:07 am

I love it! It's very amusing! ;D. I'm sooo nervous! xD

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thanks

#6 Post by kidlike » Wed Sep 26, 2007 8:15 pm

thanks everyone, I was really nervous since I already read most of the stories " Stained memories is my fav" so thanks for your kindness

P.S. yeah Axon is a made up since out off all the guys in the game I only liked jareth and he didn't really fit in this story.
still he really is a cool char. :oops:

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