The Fall of the House of Grabiner (Grabiner/PC Story)

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#16 Postby AshleyBoo » Sat Apr 14, 2012 11:28 am

Kira_A wrote:Thanks so much everyone, I really appreciate the comments.

AshleyBoo, you are cracking me up. :)

Oki, that is a great point about the teleportation. I'll have to replay Damien's thread and think about it a little more. Thanks for the advice and for the kind words.

Emichan and ElCantarde, thanks so much for taking the time to read and for the kind comments.

And Chapter 7 is now up!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/7/T ... f_Grabiner

As always, thanks for reading.

To be continued...


I try my best :wink: lol

Good chapter! holding hands yay :oops: :D
Don't know what to think of Grabby's father, part of me thinks he's charming and funny. Then he does or says something to freak me out :shock:
Still Aloysius thinking they were doing other stuff when they got married had me giggling.
Can't wait for the next chapter 8)
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#17 Postby ElCantardelaLunaOscura » Sun Apr 15, 2012 12:58 am

The dinner was interesting; when grabby's father thought another think I really laughed. I wonder what do the guests are doing there and why it was the last meeting. Continue it please. n_n
"Y a pesar de que no estás, te llevo cosida a mi piel.
Tu recuerdo se ha instalado en mi a vivir.
Y aunque nunca volverás, busco en el trastero de mi
ese beso abandonado que nunca te di."
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#18 Postby Kira_A » Tue Apr 17, 2012 3:49 am

Thanks AshleyBoo and ElCantardela! I appreciate your comments.

Hope you enjoy Chapter 8!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/8/T ... f_Grabiner

As always, thanks for reading.

To be continued...
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#19 Postby Oki » Tue Apr 17, 2012 11:52 am

I hate you. I like this story too much...it's so well written XD
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#20 Postby AshleyBoo » Wed Apr 18, 2012 12:19 am

Kira_A wrote:Thanks AshleyBoo and ElCantardela! I appreciate your comments.

Hope you enjoy Chapter 8!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/8/T ... f_Grabiner

As always, thanks for reading.

To be continued...


Guess Potsdam's getting lucky with Beardy McHaggis tonight lol
Was hoping for Grabby/Eliza cuddles but i guess it's too soon for that :wink:
Love the conversations between Eliza & Grabiner! your really good at writing him :)
Can't wait for the next chapter, just keeps getting better & better!
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#21 Postby Kira_A » Thu Apr 19, 2012 2:56 am

Thanks Oki! ...I think? Haha.

AshleyBoo, please keep your mind out of the gutter. I am sure Beardy McHaggis was a perfect gentleman.

Chapter 9 is now up: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/9/T ... f_Grabiner

As always, thanks for reading!

To be continued...
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#22 Postby AshleyBoo » Fri Apr 20, 2012 9:45 pm

Kira_A wrote:Thanks Oki! ...I think? Haha.

AshleyBoo, please keep your mind out of the gutter. I am sure Beardy McHaggis was a perfect gentleman.

Chapter 9 is now up: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/9/T ... f_Grabiner

As always, thanks for reading!

To be continued...


Well i'm sure Beardy McHaggis was a perfect gentlemen, you never know with that Potsdam though lol :wink:
Another good chapter seems Eliza has a friend, liked the bits of Grabiner history we learn.
Missed Hieronymous! hope we see him soon again.
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#23 Postby Kira_A » Fri Apr 20, 2012 11:15 pm

Too funny, now I am worried about poor Beardy. I don't think he knows what he has gotten himself into. Thanks for the comments!

Here's chapter 10: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/10/

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#24 Postby Kira_A » Tue Apr 24, 2012 1:53 am

And here's chapter 11: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/11/ ... f_Grabiner

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#25 Postby Kira_A » Thu Apr 26, 2012 12:21 am

...And Chapter 12: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/12/ ... f_Grabiner

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#26 Postby ElCantardelaLunaOscura » Thu Apr 26, 2012 9:28 pm

Amazing! the story about Violet was great! I love how you write. Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaase continue it (:
"Y a pesar de que no estás, te llevo cosida a mi piel.
Tu recuerdo se ha instalado en mi a vivir.
Y aunque nunca volverás, busco en el trastero de mi
ese beso abandonado que nunca te di."
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#27 Postby Kira_A » Sat Apr 28, 2012 12:19 am

Aw, thank you so much ElCantardela. I am glad you like the story and I appreciate the comments. Thanks for reading!

Here is Chapter 13: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/13/ ... f_Grabiner

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#28 Postby Kira_A » Tue May 01, 2012 1:25 am

And here is Chapter 14: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/14/ ... f_Grabiner

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#29 Postby Kira_A » Thu May 03, 2012 2:42 am

Chapter 15: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/15/ ... f_Grabiner

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#30 Postby AshleyBoo » Thu May 03, 2012 6:15 am

It's been awhile, finally got caught up :)
The cold & flu is starting to go around here, was stuck in bed for awhile lol

Another kiss yayy :D too bad it got interrupted!
Grabby's really going to have to talk about Violet with Eliza one day, but i have a feeling with him it could take a while.
Starting to worry about Potsdam, seems to me like Beardy is only interested in one part of her lol
Love Eliza & Mrs.Crafts friendship, nice to have someone come to the rescue at dinner time.
Giggled at Grabby getting bullied into being a host for dinner, something funny about him not always getting his way in the marriage.
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
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