The Fall of the House of Grabiner (Grabiner/PC Story)

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The Fall of the House of Grabiner (Grabiner/PC Story)

#1 Postby Kira_A » Sat Mar 31, 2012 3:16 am

Okayyy so I've finally gotten the courage to post my PC/Grabiner story on ff.net. It ended up being pretty epic! I'm planning on posting a chapter every Monday, Wednesday and Friday... for maximum suspense, of course.

I'd love to hear what you think of it. Thanks for reading!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/1/T ... f_Grabiner

To be continued...
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#2 Postby Ladygothika87 » Sat Mar 31, 2012 3:59 am

I love it! I can't wait for the next installment!

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#3 Postby Kira_A » Tue Apr 03, 2012 12:22 am

Thanks for reading, and thanks for the kind words, LadyGothika!
The next chapter is now up.

Fair warning: it contains spoilers for the novel Jane Eyre.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/2/T ... f_Grabiner

To be continued.

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#4 Postby Kira_A » Thu Apr 05, 2012 2:55 am


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#5 Postby Kira_A » Sat Apr 07, 2012 1:01 am

Chapter 4...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/4/T ... f_Grabiner

(Spoilers for Jane Eyre again, just in case.)

To be continued...

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#6 Postby AshleyBoo » Sat Apr 07, 2012 9:17 am

Loved it!!

Especially the last bit :oops:
Grabiner needs to have a drink more often :D

Can't wait for the next chapter.

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#7 Postby Kira_A » Tue Apr 10, 2012 3:01 am

Thanks for the kind words, AshleyBoo. Let this be a PSA... drinking like that is a paving stone on the road to Bad Decision Town.

...okay, PSA done. Back to the story! Here is Chapter 5.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/5/T ... f_Grabiner

As always, thanks for reading!

To be continued...

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#8 Postby Kira_A » Thu Apr 12, 2012 1:07 am


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#9 Postby AshleyBoo » Thu Apr 12, 2012 2:42 am

Kira_A wrote:Thanks for the kind words, AshleyBoo. Let this be a PSA... drinking like that is a paving stone on the road to Bad Decision Town.

...okay, PSA done. Back to the story! Here is Chapter 5.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/5/T ... f_Grabiner

As always, thanks for reading!

To be continued...


Well I certainly don't want him going to bad decision town then lol
But I really like those neck kisses :D

Great chapter loved Eliza finally getting her ring! and Grabiner fixing it so it fits :)

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#10 Postby AshleyBoo » Thu Apr 12, 2012 2:52 am

Kira_A wrote:Chapter 6...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/6/T ... f_Grabiner

To be continued...


I had a feeling they'd be stuck in the same room :D
Loving his father, and Potsdam's reactions to him lol
Hopefully Eliza & Grabby will get along better now, the more time their stuck in the room together.
Can't wait for night time to come :P

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#11 Postby Oki » Thu Apr 12, 2012 2:53 pm

Love it! Just started reading it and it has inspired me deeply. I really like your plot twist, and I'm excited to read more.

The only problem I have is the teleportation thing. In Damien's storyline we see one lousy demon who's not even the most powerful in his class can teleport one girl to a far off location and then teleport her back. So the matter of fact ton threw me off a bit.

I like how you convince me of things with Grabiner. You really pull him off quite well, in ways I wouldn't write him. I'm always afraid to trample on his character, yet you do it fairly well and don't seem afraid like me XD;

Good work

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#12 Postby emichan » Thu Apr 12, 2012 3:34 pm

damien took her to the lake, right? how far away is the lake? it definitely wasn't several hours drive.

so it still works i think.

anyway loving the story and hoping to see more!

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#13 Postby Oki » Thu Apr 12, 2012 4:13 pm

Even so, Damien is hardly a powerful magic user who has had years of experience and explicit knowledge of such a thing. Just seems silly to me.

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#14 Postby ElCantardelaLunaOscura » Thu Apr 12, 2012 9:39 pm

Oki wrote:Love it! Just started reading it and it has inspired me deeply. I really like your plot twist, and I'm excited to read more.

The only problem I have is the teleportation thing. In Damien's storyline we see one lousy demon who's not even the most powerful in his class can teleport one girl to a far off location and then teleport her back. So the matter of fact ton threw me off a bit.

I like how you convince me of things with Grabiner. You really pull him off quite well, in ways I wouldn't write him. I'm always afraid to trample on his character, yet you do it fairly well and don't seem afraid like me XD;

Good work


Now that you say it, it seems a little strange I agree.


It's a great fic, I like the way you write each character, and the plot is really interesting. Waiting for the update. Continue with your excellent work.
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Tu recuerdo se ha instalado en mi a vivir.
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#15 Postby Kira_A » Sat Apr 14, 2012 1:05 am

Thanks so much everyone, I really appreciate the comments.

AshleyBoo, you are cracking me up. :)

Oki, that is a great point about the teleportation. I'll have to replay Damien's thread and think about it a little more. Thanks for the advice and for the kind words.

Emichan and ElCantarde, thanks so much for taking the time to read and for the kind comments.

And Chapter 7 is now up!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/7/T ... f_Grabiner

As always, thanks for reading.

To be continued...


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