The Fall of the House of Grabiner (Grabiner/PC Story)
You have to wonder though where Potsdam keeps disappearing too, sneaking around with that Beardy i guess lol.Kira_A wrote:Hi AshleyBoo, glad you are feeling better! Thanks for the comments; you make me laugh.
I have to agree about Beardy, maybe he is not such a gentleman after all...
Here's chapter 16: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/16/ ... f_Grabiner
Thanks for reading!
To be continued...
I miss Grabby when he's not in the chapter, but i've enjoyed the card reading!
Wouldn't mind getting it done myself

Worried about that Empress card though, Eliza's too young to be having kids now!
I don't think Grabby would be too happy if that happened while she's still in school.
Hi Ashley, I had a lot of fun with the card reading so I'm glad you liked it. It's based on a live reading I did for the story, believe it or not... I had to switch the order of a few cards to have it make sense with the story, but the most important cards (especially the knight of swords at the beginning and the Empress at the end) showed up as you see them in the narrative. Funny the way these things work out... but we'll just have to see how they fit into the story as it continues!
And speaking of which, here is Chapter 17.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/17/ ... f_Grabiner
Thanks for reading!
To be continued...
And speaking of which, here is Chapter 17.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/17/ ... f_Grabiner
Thanks for reading!
To be continued...
Not a good chapter for Eliza!Kira_A wrote:Hi Ashley, I had a lot of fun with the card reading so I'm glad you liked it. It's based on a live reading I did for the story, believe it or not... I had to switch the order of a few cards to have it make sense with the story, but the most important cards (especially the knight of swords at the beginning and the Empress at the end) showed up as you see them in the narrative. Funny the way these things work out... but we'll just have to see how they fit into the story as it continues!
And speaking of which, here is Chapter 17.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/17/ ... f_Grabiner
Thanks for reading!
To be continued...
Fighting with Grabby

Gotta say Aloysius kind of freaked me out this chapter

Maybe Eliza should be careful wondering off on her own.
- ElCantardelaLunaOscura
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As excellent as always but I think the same, Lord Montague really freaked me out! I look forward to reading more of it!
"Y a pesar de que no estás, te llevo cosida a mi piel.
Tu recuerdo se ha instalado en mi a vivir.
Y aunque nunca volverás, busco en el trastero de mi
ese beso abandonado que nunca te di."
Tu recuerdo se ha instalado en mi a vivir.
Y aunque nunca volverás, busco en el trastero de mi
ese beso abandonado que nunca te di."
Yes Lord Montague is acting very strange, isn't he...
I wonder if things will get better for Eliza in Chapter 18?
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/18/ ... f_Grabiner
Thanks for the comments, AshleyBoo and ElCantaredela. I am glad you guys are enjoying the story!
To be continued...
I wonder if things will get better for Eliza in Chapter 18?
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/18/ ... f_Grabiner
Thanks for the comments, AshleyBoo and ElCantaredela. I am glad you guys are enjoying the story!
To be continued...
I think we can all agree things are getting worse lolKira_A wrote:Yes Lord Montague is acting very strange, isn't he...
I wonder if things will get better for Eliza in Chapter 18?
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/18/ ... f_Grabiner
Thanks for the comments, AshleyBoo and ElCantaredela. I am glad you guys are enjoying the story!
To be continued...
Hopefully Grabby will come to her rescue before anything bad happens

Really hope Aloysius isn't involved with this sudden turn of events.
Yes Eliza is in quite a bad situation, so we will see how things go in Chapter 19:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/19/ ... f_Grabiner
Thanks for reading!
To be continued...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/19/ ... f_Grabiner
Thanks for reading!
To be continued...
Well she's okay for now, i'm worried at the thought of her going into the Otherworld alone. Hopefully Potsdam comes back and they can team up or somethingKira_A wrote:Yes Eliza is in quite a bad situation, so we will see how things go in Chapter 19:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/19/ ... f_Grabiner
Thanks for reading!
To be continued...

Mr. Currie being a manus, never saw that coming though.
I figured Grabby's father was involved in this somehow, he was starting to act creepy.
Well, we're not sure what Mr. Currie is, but he isn't a manus... and he'll get very offended if you call him one, so look out!
Here's Chapter 20: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/20/ ... f_Grabiner
Thanks for reading!
To be continued...

Here's Chapter 20: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/20/ ... f_Grabiner
Thanks for reading!
To be continued...
- Ladygothika87
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- ElCantardelaLunaOscura
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Eeeek!! It's becoming even more exciting! You're a great writer. The way you describe each situation and place it's awesome. again thanks for the update Can't wait for more n_n
"Y a pesar de que no estás, te llevo cosida a mi piel.
Tu recuerdo se ha instalado en mi a vivir.
Y aunque nunca volverás, busco en el trastero de mi
ese beso abandonado que nunca te di."
Tu recuerdo se ha instalado en mi a vivir.
Y aunque nunca volverás, busco en el trastero de mi
ese beso abandonado que nunca te di."
I'm not scared of Mr.Currie, I can take himKira_A wrote:Well, we're not sure what Mr. Currie is, but he isn't a manus... and he'll get very offended if you call him one, so look out!![]()
Here's Chapter 20: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/20/ ... f_Grabiner
Thanks for reading!
To be continued...

I knew there was something off about Grabby's father, but this is just wrong. Wonder what happeden to make him like this.
I'm going to mourn the loss of Mrs.Craft & Beardy.
Getting worried about Grabby after getting hit, not sure how Eliza's going to win against his father.
Wow, thank you everyone for the kind comments. It definitely makes my day to read them. XD
LadyGothika, that's so nice of you to say. My dream is to write YA novels, so who knows, maybe someday...
Thanks ElCantardela! I am really glad you are enjoying the story.
AshleyBoo, thanks for the nice words about Mrs. Craft and Beardy... it really was a wrench.
But if there were ever a death match between Mr. Currie and you, I'd bet on you.
And with that, here's Chapter 21! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/21/
Thanks for reading!
To be continued...
LadyGothika, that's so nice of you to say. My dream is to write YA novels, so who knows, maybe someday...
Thanks ElCantardela! I am really glad you are enjoying the story.
AshleyBoo, thanks for the nice words about Mrs. Craft and Beardy... it really was a wrench.

And with that, here's Chapter 21! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/21/
Thanks for reading!
To be continued...
- ElCantardelaLunaOscura
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Well, that was really unexpected, everything Lord Montague said was awful. And about Postdam I nearly fell off my chair when I read that. A great chapter, very mysterious. Can't wait for the next one. You're a great writer.
"Y a pesar de que no estás, te llevo cosida a mi piel.
Tu recuerdo se ha instalado en mi a vivir.
Y aunque nunca volverás, busco en el trastero de mi
ese beso abandonado que nunca te di."
Tu recuerdo se ha instalado en mi a vivir.
Y aunque nunca volverás, busco en el trastero de mi
ese beso abandonado que nunca te di."