The Fall of the House of Grabiner (Grabiner/PC Story)

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Kira_A · #31 Post by **Kira_A** » Sat May 05, 2012 1:23 am

Hi AshleyBoo, glad you are feeling better! Thanks for the comments; you make me laugh.

I have to agree about Beardy, maybe he is not such a gentleman after all...

Here's chapter 16: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/16/ ... f_Grabiner

Thanks for reading!

To be continued...

AshleyBoo · #32 Post by **AshleyBoo** » Sat May 05, 2012 5:40 am

Kira_A wrote:Hi AshleyBoo, glad you are feeling better! Thanks for the comments; you make me laugh.

I have to agree about Beardy, maybe he is not such a gentleman after all...

Here's chapter 16: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/16/ ... f_Grabiner

Thanks for reading!

To be continued...

You have to wonder though where Potsdam keeps disappearing too, sneaking around with that Beardy i guess lol.
I miss Grabby when he's not in the chapter, but i've enjoyed the card reading!
Wouldn't mind getting it done myself

Worried about that Empress card though, Eliza's too young to be having kids now!
I don't think Grabby would be too happy if that happened while she's still in school.

Kira_A · #33 Post by **Kira_A** » Tue May 08, 2012 3:36 am

Hi Ashley, I had a lot of fun with the card reading so I'm glad you liked it. It's based on a live reading I did for the story, believe it or not... I had to switch the order of a few cards to have it make sense with the story, but the most important cards (especially the knight of swords at the beginning and the Empress at the end) showed up as you see them in the narrative. Funny the way these things work out... but we'll just have to see how they fit into the story as it continues!

And speaking of which, here is Chapter 17.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/17/ ... f_Grabiner

Thanks for reading!

To be continued...

AshleyBoo · #34 Post by **AshleyBoo** » Tue May 08, 2012 6:25 am

Kira_A wrote:Hi Ashley, I had a lot of fun with the card reading so I'm glad you liked it. It's based on a live reading I did for the story, believe it or not... I had to switch the order of a few cards to have it make sense with the story, but the most important cards (especially the knight of swords at the beginning and the Empress at the end) showed up as you see them in the narrative. Funny the way these things work out... but we'll just have to see how they fit into the story as it continues!

And speaking of which, here is Chapter 17.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/17/ ... f_Grabiner

Thanks for reading!

To be continued...

Not a good chapter for Eliza!
Fighting with Grabby

he better apologize soon!
Gotta say Aloysius kind of freaked me out this chapter

Maybe Eliza should be careful wondering off on her own.

ElCantardelaLunaOscura · #35 Post by **ElCantardelaLunaOscura** » Wed May 09, 2012 10:20 pm

As excellent as always but I think the same, Lord Montague really freaked me out! I look forward to reading more of it!

Kira_A · #36 Post by **Kira_A** » Thu May 10, 2012 1:43 am

Yes Lord Montague is acting very strange, isn't he...

I wonder if things will get better for Eliza in Chapter 18?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/18/ ... f_Grabiner

Thanks for the comments, AshleyBoo and ElCantaredela. I am glad you guys are enjoying the story!

To be continued...

AshleyBoo · #37 Post by **AshleyBoo** » Thu May 10, 2012 11:08 am

Kira_A wrote:Yes Lord Montague is acting very strange, isn't he...

I wonder if things will get better for Eliza in Chapter 18?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/18/ ... f_Grabiner

Thanks for the comments, AshleyBoo and ElCantaredela. I am glad you guys are enjoying the story!

To be continued...

I think we can all agree things are getting worse lol
Hopefully Grabby will come to her rescue before anything bad happens

and they'll get along again somewhat!
Really hope Aloysius isn't involved with this sudden turn of events.

Kira_A · #38 Post by **Kira_A** » Sat May 12, 2012 1:03 am

Yes Eliza is in quite a bad situation, so we will see how things go in Chapter 19:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/19/ ... f_Grabiner

Thanks for reading!

To be continued...

AshleyBoo · #39 Post by **AshleyBoo** » Sat May 12, 2012 5:41 pm

Kira_A wrote:Yes Eliza is in quite a bad situation, so we will see how things go in Chapter 19:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/19/ ... f_Grabiner

Thanks for reading!

To be continued...

Well she's okay for now, i'm worried at the thought of her going into the Otherworld alone. Hopefully Potsdam comes back and they can team up or something

Mr. Currie being a manus, never saw that coming though.
I figured Grabby's father was involved in this somehow, he was starting to act creepy.

Kira_A · #40 Post by **Kira_A** » Tue May 15, 2012 2:27 am

Well, we're not sure what Mr. Currie is, but he isn't a manus... and he'll get very offended if you call him one, so look out!

Here's Chapter 20: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/20/ ... f_Grabiner

Thanks for reading!

To be continued...

Ladygothika87 · #41 Post by **Ladygothika87** » Tue May 15, 2012 5:17 am

Each time I get to the end I go "Nooooo" because it's so good and I don't want it to stop! Seriously makes my day to read your updates. You're such a talented writer, you should think about doing it professionally if you don't already. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

ElCantardelaLunaOscura · #42 Post by **ElCantardelaLunaOscura** » Tue May 15, 2012 4:31 pm

Eeeek!! It's becoming even more exciting! You're a great writer. The way you describe each situation and place it's awesome. again thanks for the update Can't wait for more n_n

AshleyBoo · #43 Post by **AshleyBoo** » Tue May 15, 2012 7:24 pm

Kira_A wrote:Well, we're not sure what Mr. Currie is, but he isn't a manus... and he'll get very offended if you call him one, so look out!

Here's Chapter 20: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/20/ ... f_Grabiner

Thanks for reading!

To be continued...

I'm not scared of Mr.Currie, I can take him

I knew there was something off about Grabby's father, but this is just wrong. Wonder what happeden to make him like this.
I'm going to mourn the loss of Mrs.Craft & Beardy.
Getting worried about Grabby after getting hit, not sure how Eliza's going to win against his father.

Kira_A · #44 Post by **Kira_A** » Thu May 17, 2012 2:09 am

Wow, thank you everyone for the kind comments. It definitely makes my day to read them. XD

LadyGothika, that's so nice of you to say. My dream is to write YA novels, so who knows, maybe someday...

Thanks ElCantardela! I am really glad you are enjoying the story.

AshleyBoo, thanks for the nice words about Mrs. Craft and Beardy... it really was a wrench.

But if there were ever a death match between Mr. Currie and you, I'd bet on you.

And with that, here's Chapter 21! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7973174/21/

Thanks for reading!

To be continued...

ElCantardelaLunaOscura · #45 Post by **ElCantardelaLunaOscura** » Thu May 17, 2012 3:30 am

Well, that was really unexpected, everything Lord Montague said was awful. And about Postdam I nearly fell off my chair when I read that. A great chapter, very mysterious. Can't wait for the next one. You're a great writer.