
But before I even bought the game, I played the demo and saw that Hanako had set up a contest to give out a free copy of the game. Some of you may have seen the post I put up in the Magical Diary part of the forum where I was debating whether to buy it or take my chances with a story. Well, while I was deliberating, I started writing my fan fic just in case. I ended up buying the game (Thank you to Hanako and all others who replyed!), and thank goodness I did, because my schedule is a total mess now that school has started up again. Needless to say I played the MESS out of Magical Diary, and enjoyed every minute and every storyline possibility.
Well before school started, I took a trip up to Canada with a friend, and on the drive up I told him about Magical Diary, and it eventually led to me admitting that I had started writing a fan fic. He encouraged me to keep going, and said he would help with editing and ideas.
So here I am now. I have only posted Chapter 1 so far, but I have Chapter 2 pretty much ready to go. I just want to see what the Magical Diary/Hanako Games community has to say before I completely continue. You can critique it here in this thread, or on the Fanfiction.net site if you like. I'll appreciate anything, so please post your thoughts and encouragements/critiques

A little background: Obviously this is based on the contest Hanako had in August about an original magical child who finds out about their powers and gets "the choice." This will be set in the same universe that "Sue" is in, but this girl is a year younger, so later on you'll get to see what kind of role Sue has in my story ;) I am choosing to have Donald be the love interest, but I do have some Grabiner love in my heart, so you'll see his character a bit too.
Ok enough rambling. Here's Chapter 1 of my story "Conquered by a Kiss." Hope you enjoy!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7368074/1/C ... _by_a_Kiss