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Xenostatica · #1 Post by **Xenostatica** » Sun Aug 14, 2011 12:09 am

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/15443377/fanfic.jpg

Okay so it is a little big so I made the link for it and right now my art editing stuff is down so no color for it guys. Sorry.

But leave any comments and opinions as it is very much appreciated and helps me improve my skills.

coco96 · #2 Post by **coco96** » Sun Aug 14, 2011 12:14 am

It's really cute!!!

Ladygothika87 · #3 Post by **Ladygothika87** » Sun Aug 14, 2011 12:19 am

That's so adorable!!!

mermaid · #4 Post by **mermaid** » Sun Aug 14, 2011 6:31 am

that is just so cute! you should colour it soon!

Yumeshojo · #5 Post by **Yumeshojo** » Sat Aug 20, 2011 4:46 pm

Daw

You really should color it, that is so adorable~! Too cute, good job!

Yuniepie · #6 Post by **Yuniepie** » Wed Aug 24, 2011 7:40 am

its cute but i dont like the cheek-circle things on grabiner. they make him look like a douche.

Xenostatica · #7 Post by **Xenostatica** » Thu Aug 25, 2011 12:42 am

I'm curious Yuniepie, in what way does it make him look like a douche, could you elaborate on your criticism of the draft?

In what way do you think it would be improved?

I would like to know as a criticism it would help me improve on the work at hand.

kyoli · #8 Post by **kyoli** » Thu Aug 25, 2011 9:42 pm

that's really cute!

Yuniepie · #9 Post by **Yuniepie** » Mon Aug 29, 2011 1:33 pm

Xenostatica wrote:I'm curious Yuniepie, in what way does it make him look like a douche, could you elaborate on your criticism of the draft?

In what way do you think it would be improved?

I would like to know as a criticism it would help me improve on the work at hand.

Alright- just bear in mind though my criticism is entirely relevant on what you've drawn- not how you've drawn it. I actually think your drawing skill is really good.

Obviously you've chibi-fied the characters which is apparent through the "cheek-circles." The cheeks technically aren't what annoys me though; I _cringe_ at chibi characters that have the regular sized bodies and haven't been "squished down." This is just my thing though and everyone else can like their chibis with bodies that are in proportion to their heads but I don't. I like big cute heads on non-existent bodies.

I think your drawings remind me of my own when I first started drawing chibis so I may less tolerant. Sorry for my bluntness.

You should look up queenofdorks on deviantart- she is the god of drawing chibis.

Yuniepie · #10 Post by **Yuniepie** » Mon Aug 29, 2011 1:44 pm

It's a good thing you had me elaborate.

Looking back my first comment wasn't particularly helpful, even if I got to use the word "douche" which is a fun word.

TrinityKarose · #11 Post by **TrinityKarose** » Mon May 21, 2012 7:19 pm

Awwwwwwwe~! It's soooo cute~!