Grabiner/ Sue fan story *spoiler*

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Hopeless Romantic
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#106 Post by Hopeless Romantic » Sat Jul 28, 2012 6:48 am

:D :D :D Wow! I love your take on the Grabiner story line, a lot!

I've just purchased the game and have put all my extra time into it, 30 hours give or take. lol Its been like my other job! No sleep for me! I came across your story after I'd totally fallen for Grabiner and I couldn't stop reading, I was late for work, opps, and read the rest when i got home.

And Hanako, I love you!! :wink:

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#107 Post by anastasia.stephenson » Tue Sep 04, 2012 6:12 pm

i read all but two pieces of your story last nigh and i was sick from school today so I finished it today and I LOVED IT!! I wish it never had to end. I love Grabiners story and when I find good fanfiction I am like YESS!!!!!!

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#108 Post by cae » Tue Sep 25, 2012 10:52 am

THIS is all sorts of awesome. I thought Grabby was in character almost (if not all) of the time. And the depth you gave to the other characters, while keeping them in the realm of reality to the game was great.
I love that you didn't go way off the deep-end with other magic stuff, and incorporated things like charms and magic in making foods and things for others.
I also loved the cat. It makes me miss my kitties (because I'm in Japan, and they're in America :( ) so it made me happy to see Sue with her kitty in the end.

And Callas... I LOVE the VN you made for the story. (Playing through it right now.)

Haha... the car scene was cute, it made me giggle. :P

Good work, both of you!

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