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by lill_sweetty
Tue Sep 09, 2008 12:54 am
Forum: Make your Own Games!
Topic: Destiny: "You Were Never My Friend"
Replies: 65
Views: 20224

It's okay. I said before, it's a huge commitment, and a lot of people don't even make it this far, so I have to congrats you on that beforehand. But these are just suggestions to make your game better. Like I said, downsizing your maps might be best, or laying the design down before creating it. Thi...
by lill_sweetty
Fri Sep 05, 2008 9:10 pm
Forum: Make your Own Games!
Topic: Destiny: "You Were Never My Friend"
Replies: 65
Views: 20224

You weren't angry? You sounded like it. But regardless, I agree with his comments, all of them. The repetitive level of Destiny is a lot more than PM2. and I think he raised an interesting question. A gamemaker wants to make the best game they can. You knew it was repetitive, so why did you not chan...
by lill_sweetty
Thu Sep 04, 2008 8:32 pm
Forum: Make your Own Games!
Topic: Destiny: "You Were Never My Friend"
Replies: 65
Views: 20224

Don't be mad. The poster might've written his posts frankly, but he did say he liked the idea, the execution just wasn't there, and he told why, and he seemed upset that he couldn't play it anymore. With criticism, it might sting, because the game's your baby (I nearly cried when I got my first bad ...
by lill_sweetty
Thu Sep 04, 2008 8:14 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Story contest question
Replies: 4
Views: 3078

O_o

One near x-mas? *marks calendar*

Ooh...how about when whenever twinkle toes skating is released? Isn't that enough of a celebration cause? XD Another good game in the Hanako games portfolio.
by lill_sweetty
Tue Sep 02, 2008 3:08 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Cute Knight-Based RP Adventure
Replies: 367
Views: 75637

Reene looked at Calixte, "No, I don't know him. Or, I met him, at least, but merely briefly, when I was going to meet you. He came from out of nowhere rather suspiciously." She remembered his almost inhumane experience when she was out at night. Then she shrugged, "Your concern seemed to be for the ...
by lill_sweetty
Mon Sep 01, 2008 12:51 am
Forum: Make your Own Games!
Topic: Destiny: "You Were Never My Friend"
Replies: 65
Views: 20224

Drop... is just slang for add in. Not out. Put in lots of hints through conversations, ect., but don't reveal anything too much. Just get the player excited and wanting to find out about him and the plot.
by lill_sweetty
Sun Aug 31, 2008 3:19 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Cute Knight-Based RP Adventure
Replies: 367
Views: 75637

Reene looked at Calixte quietly. She could've sworn Calixte's strange reaction was towards the strange man. Did she know him...? That backed up her opinion that he was dangerous, but... "We have to go in," Reene said, also turning so that she could face Calixte, who was hugging her backpack close to...
by lill_sweetty
Sun Aug 31, 2008 2:53 am
Forum: Make your Own Games!
Topic: Destiny: "You Were Never My Friend"
Replies: 65
Views: 20224

Sorry...I didn't make much sense, did I? I'm not saying you're to change the story. The story is fine as it is. I'm saying you should get the story out better. Ie. your premise is good, but the execution could be better. From what I can understand, mysterious danger is what you're SUPPOSED to feel f...
by lill_sweetty
Sun Aug 31, 2008 2:40 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Cute Knight-Based RP Adventure
Replies: 367
Views: 75637

Reene listened to Calixte's explanations. It still did not explain why she left, but perhaps she was just fed up with Prince Nico. Luna seemed to have left for the same reason... And she couldn't quite blame them really. She remember her distaste for the flirtatious young man. She looked back and sa...
by lill_sweetty
Sat Aug 30, 2008 4:23 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Cute Knight-Based RP Adventure
Replies: 367
Views: 75637

Reene looked at Calixte, who was regaining her sense, and speaking. She still looked rather lost, but it was a natural kind of lost, as if she wasn't really aware of what she had seen before. Reene felt relieved, because it proved Calixte had not really lived in those eyes, like she had, so she deci...
by lill_sweetty
Sat Aug 30, 2008 1:53 am
Forum: Make your Own Games!
Topic: Destiny: "You Were Never My Friend"
Replies: 65
Views: 20224

Well... the mystique thing wasn't really working out. At first, I didn't really see any mysterious danger until Theodore went missing, when that kicked in. I don't think that's the best thing for the game, because then: A. You expect the game to end after Day 30. B. It sort of kills the "I want to f...
by lill_sweetty
Sat Aug 30, 2008 1:44 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Cute Knight-Based RP Adventure
Replies: 367
Views: 75637

Calixte backed away. Reene stepped forward looked into her eyes, and even though it was dark, what she saw scared her. Calixte's eyes...were vacant. She wasn't seeing Reene, but reflecting back her feelings of what she saw. Fear... pain... loneliness... hopelessness... lost somewhere... Those eyes, ...
by lill_sweetty
Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:18 pm
Forum: Make your Own Games!
Topic: Destiny: "You Were Never My Friend"
Replies: 65
Views: 20224

~_~ Aren't you taking too much in your hands? A game and then a subgame. Wow.... Anyway, okay, for Theodore, you could just say some trivial things. Get across the message that he didn't have much of a childhood. Have him talk to you about monsters, and what's out there, and whether or not he's curi...
by lill_sweetty
Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:02 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Cute Knight-Based RP Adventure
Replies: 367
Views: 75637

The man -whatever he was- answered harshly at first, and then became courteous, perhaps deciding it would be a better approach. He stepped closer to her, and she instantly backed away. She raised an eyebrow at his question of whether this town was dangerous or not. From what she has seen in her chil...
by lill_sweetty
Thu Aug 28, 2008 7:02 pm
Forum: Make your Own Games!
Topic: Destiny: "You Were Never My Friend"
Replies: 65
Views: 20224

Okay, I'm just going to throw some things out there. And be prepared for a whole lot of random ideas... Girl talks: -Exams (I'm actually pretty confused about what you need to pass too, so it'd be nice....) And something like this is what I meant by more natural: Ella: I can't believe this! Did you ...