Hanako Games

Donald leaves before actually giving permission to Virginia's request. At the end of the bouquet scene, the line "Can I help with anything?" is followed by "So, is there anything I can help you with?". Delete the Can I help line before jumping to the next label? Maybe a codex entry for the tetronarc...

The game will crash after exiting the first dungeon if you have the transitions turned off.

I'd cut Grabner's "I am a living reminder--" line. The length of his sequence is out of sync with the pacing of the other ones and his dialogue will have more dramatic punch if you leave the first line out. Was thrilled to see the individual at the 28 second mark, if she's who I think she is.

The main problem I have with the choose-every-response style of interaction is that the protagonist's responses are usually limited to a single sentence. It's difficult to describe one's feelings or experiences within such a small space and providing more choices doesn't necessarily solve the proble...