Hanako Games

That's alright.

Thank you for the feedback you provided. Literally every single word anyone says about it helps me to understand where I am and where I need to be.

I agree completely about combat-as-filler. Using combat as filler leads to emotionally dead fights, which undermine the impact of the fights that would actually matter. I already have a sort of soft time limit on my turns: if the number for your action comes up and you don't say anything, it passes ...

So the way the What and How get told depends on the Why and the Who and the When. That makes a lot of sense and I feel silly for needing to be told that, but it does help. Thank you. The answer isn't quite so easy for me to implement as I was hoping, but nothing ever is. Now that I have an answer, I...

I have an odd question for all you writers out here: What do you think about when writing a combat scene? I know that the actual answer is going to be specific to the characters and context of the scene. I'm not looking for help writing a combat scene per-se, but for references about what the experi...